“Don’t hesitate,”
I have retained
nothing else.
Oh, it feels good.
I can’t really
reestablish my equilibrium.
The feeling startles me but not in a bad way.I’m cerebral. Occasionally to a fault. I can say for certain that it’s been a help as well as a hindrance. Particularly in areas that don’t entirely depend on intellectual processing.
Like some of my theatrical ventures. And some of my past relationships. D O E – 7 – Commentary (cont.)
“Don’t hesitate,”
I have retained
nothing else.
Oh, it feels good.
I can’t really
reestablish my equilibrium.
The feeling startles me but not in a bad way.commentary on this poem
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“What’s so funny?”
I don’t want you
wondering for
the idea.
I can’t see any
novelty
-I said the word.
What in heaven’s name does that mean?
I doubt
I have
to be
vulnerable.I’ll be honest. I’m wrestling with the “source material” for this project. And, sure, that’s not necessarily a bad thing. D O E – 6 – Commentary (cont.)
“What’s so funny?”
I don’t want you
wondering for
the idea.
I can’t see any
novelty
-I said the word.
What in heaven’s name does that mean?
I doubt
I have
to be
vulnerable.commentary on this poem
all poems in this project
all commentary posts
all posts related to this project
You can learn about the impulse behind this project here.
I am so confused.
It’s not
what concerns me most, because
I don’t want to lose
my dream…Did you miss me?
I was in the Rocky Mountains last Thursday and… well, I don’t really have an excuse for not posting a poem last Tuesday other than being distracted by preparations for being the in the mountains. Mountains! D O E – 5 – Commentary (cont.)
